-1st draft & Feedback of my digipak-

The first thing that i did was i went on Google and got an image of a Digipak flat plan with two CD plates because i want to do a Bonus CD:



Then what i did was add each different image and fit the image to the squares. I had to resize, crop and drag them into the boxes:

This is the first draft of my shots. It is simple as all i did was put the images in. Overall i think that it needs some work and has room for improvement.

My teacher pointed out that my mise en sene is a bit of a problem. In the second image, wire from the bedroom is shown which it shouldn't.



Theses three feedback sheets are what some of the people in my class commented about how my digipak looks so far:

The main critiscism for my Digipak is that my images do not flow and that they are different in every shot. I am planning to re-do all of my shots and make sure that they make sense and that they are linked. I am planning to re-shoot her in a studio where there is black background first and then in photoshop i might be able to change the place to another colour which i would like to be purple as that is the colour i wanted my theme to be. I also need to make sure that i include text onto my Digipak

I also may change the layout of my Digipak panels and instead of two CD panels, i will have one so that i can add another image to a panel.